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		<title>Writing Prompt: Too Deep</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 19 Jan 2010 13:25:45 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Catriona</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[I decided just to do a little mini-blurb based on some of the planning I&#8217;ve been doing for &#8220;Too Deep&#8221;. It&#8217;s when he&#8217;s telling Brad about the time that he gets re-recruited, after a resistance member overhears him having an argument with a gang member, and then tracks him down in time to prevent him [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I decided just to do a little mini-blurb based on some of the planning I&#8217;ve been doing for &#8220;Too Deep&#8221;. It&#8217;s when he&#8217;s telling Brad about the time that he gets re-recruited, after a resistance member overhears him having an argument with a gang member, and then tracks him down in time to prevent him successfully committing suicide. </p>
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Brad let go of his hand, so that he could reach up and wipe his own eyes, &#8220;Sorry,&#8221; he murmured.<br />
Sam gave a shrug, &#8220;Shit happens, I guess.&#8221;<br />
Brad shook his head, &#8220;No, I mean&#8230;most of the people I grew up around they were the sort of shallow like your ex, Roy, where they would want to kill themselves if their family didn&#8217;t buy them the best <a href="http://www.acnecleansers.org/">best acne cleanser</a>, so they had to go to school with blemishes, or they&#8217;d find some other vapid way to manipulate their parents&#8230;it&#8217;s not like I haven&#8217;t seen the scars before, and there has to be more than one time, based on those&#8230;&#8221; he hesitated reaching a hand out towards Sam&#8217;s sleeve, to roll it back and trace the lines, &#8220;Of course most of them would have the scars cosmetically removed after a certain time when it was no longer cool. Us poor Earthers with our terrible problems,&#8221; he laughed sarcastically.<br />
Sam gave a slight smile, &#8220;It&#8217;s still kinda stupid,&#8221; he said, &#8220;here I was on the one hand wanting to help make things better, and then I did that, but I was completely lost. I knew the father had connections, but everything was so mysterious, I hadn&#8217;t had time to find anything he had written. I was terrified that my leaving the orphanage so quickly meant the idiot military police had found that information and torn apart the entire resistance. Not logical thought I know, but still&#8230;&#8221;
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<p>I&#8217;m having an issue deciding on tense. I had to go back through and edit the blurb a little because it started out past tense, shifted to present somewhere in there and then back to past. My issue with the tense is based on the fact that he&#8217;s telling the story of his past in his present, so I feel as though it should be in present tense, except for the flashbacks being in the past; but I don&#8217;t know if that will be too jarring. </p>
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